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Innocent Dreams!!

07 Dec

The kid held it high up

Her tiny frock waving around her fragile knees,

The pink lace rounding up her neck

She lifted her toes now and then,

Jumped and hopped the hills

In a coma of a fairy fiction

In the Stupor of a Bellowed Wait

She had run over the many bushes,

Thorns that wound her velvet skin

Scars ripped the string

Her joy knew no bound

She had torn the blue sky

With the kite in her palm

The inanimate that brought

Curves on her soft lips

She had tied a note on the crest of the kite

That read,” I know you are beyond the skies,

Stole Someone from me,

But I wont give up, I will get her back,

Force her to stay back home,

Tie her up with the window panes or the pillars

Next time I meet my Mother, I wont loose her to you”

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3 Comments

Posted by on December 7, 2007 in Heart Felt (Poems)

 

3 responses to “Innocent Dreams!!

  1. pragati

    December 8, 2007 at 5:03 am

    really nice and it touched my heart, and written in very simple words.

     
  2. Sunita Rajan

    December 8, 2007 at 12:29 pm

    Hey Revathi… its really good. V can say short and sweet.

     
  3. jui

    December 10, 2007 at 7:16 am

    beautiful.. the poem is more like a chapter in someone’s life.. i love the kite line here and the poem is really well written ..

     

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