Emotional High !!!

29 Apr

Wish this phase just travels long
With no boundaries to hurdle through
Or a deadline to numb your mind
Just let the Buterflies fly through
Tickle your heart and soul a little more
The feet running through cold water
That makes you flowing through every situation
Your eyes waving here and there in search of the same sign
The same tiny gesture that forces you to hold on
Hold on till eternity
Hold on even if nothing fruitful emerges
Hold on though you feel you are not worth the smile
Though you dont match the charm
Clung, though you know, you are not even near the tender heart
Still a thought flashes through your mind
It says that I have a heart, I have a pure heart
That beats for you and it is the only part worth you!!!


Posted by on April 29, 2008 in Heart Felt (Poems)


6 responses to “Emotional High !!!

  1. Ashu

    April 30, 2008 at 4:29 am

    I guess I knw ……sum1’s on ur mind girl!! n m sure wen tat sum1 reads it n understands tat its for him…… he’s surely gonna fall 4 u!!

  2. Revathi

    April 30, 2008 at 4:36 am

    Hey Ashu… simple phrase for you “Shut Up”……no ones on my mind…and yes its just a cool poem..hmmm gud effect I guess…haha…n yes thanx for the appreciation…if ever that was intended hehe 🙂

  3. Ashu

    April 30, 2008 at 4:38 am

    hey girl sorry 4 tat…. I mentioned sum1’s on ur mind.but I ws wrong.actually there’s sum1 in ur heart:)
    Gud going ……………

  4. thoughtforcreativity

    April 30, 2008 at 9:04 am

    Nice one:)


  5. Jui

    May 7, 2008 at 7:23 am

    wat yaar? u dont tell me anything these days.. 😦 from that hindi poem of urs…u just dont tell me..

    BTW, here i liked the 3 hold on lines very much..beautiful.. keep writing.. and telling us..;)

  6. hitzy

    May 14, 2008 at 9:33 am

    Thats a refreshing 1!


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