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Lost Identity…..

22 Jul

Slog the day long
Sweat flooding the floor
Ignoring your folks
You Wink at your kids
Transform your partner
Into a Recluse Nun

You hunt for your self
You explore to make a deal
You foray for the Greater Soul
You Search your identity

You pen your heart out
Dance with the blissful music
Paint the nature with green and Blue
Collect unknown and unseen assets

You hunt for your self
You explore to make a deal
You foray for the Greater Soul
You Search your identity

You save a child to be your heir
Slave another to restore the lineage
You make presentations of a unique idea
You do make your corpse expensive

You hunt for your self
You explore to make a deal
You foray for the Greater Soul
You Search your identity
But when you are buried under layers
When you are an ashe in the Ganges
When ages pass and the leaf is dry
When dreams will have no more meaning
Your self will soak itself
With no Man uttering your Name
Just with no Identity left
Simply a case of an Identity Lost.

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4 Comments

Posted by on July 22, 2008 in Heart Felt (Poems)

 

4 responses to “Lost Identity…..

  1. Anoop

    July 22, 2008 at 2:29 pm

    abee khatarnaaak
    I think now i need to start searching for my identity i just realised it how important it is to search my identity 😛

     
  2. jui

    July 25, 2008 at 4:44 am

    beautiful.. very metaphoric..keep it up..

     
  3. Senthil Kumar

    July 25, 2008 at 2:08 pm

    Hey PQ,
    Verry well written:). This post proves that you aren’t a kid any more in our so called literary domain and you have infact moved to the next level.

    I am so happy to see you grow from strength to strenght. Keep up the good work and keep posting on a regular basis.

    SK

     
  4. Raman

    November 7, 2008 at 6:34 pm

    this picture is fantastic…

     

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