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Desire….

23 Sep

Raindrops on the window pane,
Remind me of your first touch;
The chillness in the car,
Reminds me of the warmth you gave;
I glance at the next seat,
And wish I could hold your hands when lightening strikes;
I scroll my fingers through the seat next to me,
And wish I could hug you whenever thunder strikes…

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9 Comments

Posted by on September 23, 2009 in Heart Felt (Poems)

 

9 responses to “Desire….

  1. smitha

    September 23, 2009 at 11:24 am

    hmmmm….. hota hai ye haal jab pyaar kisise hota hai…..keep it up dear!!!

     
    • revathisrinivasan

      September 23, 2009 at 11:27 am

      Uffff someone commented ohh nooo Smi you commented hahaha I am noting the date today…23rd Sept…hope it doesn’t pour a lot 😛

       
  2. Sushant

    September 23, 2009 at 11:59 am

    Really heartfelt…aint it revu 🙂
    love the simplicity and fragile comparisons with nature

    Keep Posting

     
    • revathisrinivasan

      September 23, 2009 at 12:03 pm

      Hey Sushant…thanx 🙂

       
  3. lynette

    September 23, 2009 at 7:50 pm

    loovveeedd it…..awssuum babess…d bestt till date…;)
    keepp writingg…..

     
  4. Sabah

    September 29, 2009 at 6:32 am

    hmmmm… aaaah… ummmm.. errrr… well…. see… look… it’s aaaaah.. hehehehe.. simple and sweet and cute… love the feelin u r feelin! s

     
  5. Chandni

    October 5, 2009 at 6:26 am

    Aaye haye..
    Ye mastana mausam..Kya kya armaan jagaye..

     
  6. Shreya

    October 18, 2009 at 3:50 pm

    this is sooooooooo sweet! i wonder how people can come up with poems 😦
    btw…i really want to know how do i follow you??! cause am on blogspot n this is wordpress :/

     
  7. Kalpana Sundar

    August 16, 2011 at 4:48 am

    Very touching indeed 🙂 !!!

     

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